Balrog Bossing Guide

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  1. Zelly

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    Zelly published a new guide:

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    Good guide for some severely outdated content.

    I'd suggest formatting a bit more so that there aren't just multiple big block-paragraphs of text; your images right now are great for breaking it up but it's still a little word-heavy. You may also want to try cutting down a lot of the text, reread through your guide and remove a few redundancies.
    Ex: "You will need to do a small amount of damage", "The amount of damage is extremely small", and "50k total damage is all you need though" are all in the same paragraph.

    Additionally, maybe you could expand more on the Rewards section by listing out the items and item types.
     
  3. Zelly

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    Fair points. I'll shall do that, I also wanted to add a gif of Balrog doing his spell casting animation anyway as I feel that is the main thing to look out for in the whole content.
     
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    Wow neat guide! I forgot about the existence of balrog tbh but really cool stuff!